   Arn 2008-04-02 . chapter 1peretty good song ;O |
 Leaves of Labefaction 2008-03-31 . chapter 1I can really imagine this as a song... it would be a very good one. Great job, I like the concept.
-LoL |
 Vergissmeinnicht 2008-03-31 . chapter 1I like the title...I'm pretty sure many people can relate to it. The lyrics were nicely written and I enjoyed the rhyming scheme you used. Nice work! |
 Poetryfreak173 2008-03-31 . chapter 1What's the point of this poem(I don't mean this insultingly, I just can't grasp it.)? |
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