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kanpai7440 2008-05-28 . chapter 1
i ttly heart this
Projectile Cupcakes 2008-04-09 . chapter 3
Oh the wrongness of that encounter. I loved the part where Edgar kept jumping off the couch, it was wonderful, I was wondering if Allan had some kind of control he kept using. Edgar is my favorite even though he's a serious jerk. He makes me laugh.

Allan's weird though he's mean and nice at the same time it's strange. Like Bella! her eyes do sound scary, especially since she just showed up from nowhere.
Projectile Cupcakes 2008-04-03 . chapter 2
A Game? Haha Yeah right. They are so pervey cheating landlords and trying to seduce their rommate.

Allan and Edgar have problems.

And the landlord in the Mumu is kinda scary. Why is everyone so mean to Ari, she just wanted a place to sleep. Instead she gets creepy twins and a angry landlady-lord. She needs a hug.
Projectile Cupcakes 2008-04-03 . chapter 1
Poor Ari That is one weird ass situation to walk into. Rude and incestuous. I would have smack him for the whole thing with the cum. Grr! Nasty, not that bad my ass. I have to find out if tomorrow gets better. It probably will but not for Ari, hehe!
fantasy4luvr 2008-04-02 . chapter 2
great chapter i loved it
haha..yeah that landlady is evil
fantasy4luvr 2008-04-01 . chapter 1
great storyline
omg she better end up with both twins
haha..threesome anyone?
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