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| Franziska 2008-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseWell Done! Is the laure an allusion to your pen-name? Anyway: I like the image. The laure is less commonplace than the rose or the ivy. The poem is written in a very poetic language. |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abusePretty. (: I like the historical feel to this (ancient Greece, right?) because I thought it added a touch more of magic/romanticism. I love the gentle, soothing, strengthening tone. I got the impression of a noble-woman addressing a soldier, but that's my interpretation. |