Hello Tanin

I like the fact that you described the forms of nervousness, but perhaps describe the why’S behind it. The reasons that people get those feelings. It will help you with your explanations of what it is and how to over come it, if you get psychological and/or philosophical. Nervousness and feelings has a lot to do with psychology and applying the philosophical concepts can definitely be good.
Rachel

OMG, Tanin, this is amazing. I love the vocabulary you use and the deep thoughts that it took to make this, usually people don't question these kinds of things. Though, I must admit, it does sound rather bitter. Were you irritated or bitter when you wrote it?

I love it, love it, love it. My favorite part was the toast. Lol. Just kidding.

Gaki