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| Amaryllis Faye 2008-07-07 ch 1,  | abusejerry sucks |
| soccerfreak18 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abusei like this too. You're really good. this was uh delightfully funny. that is a pretty bad day lol. but this is good keep it up! |
| rachely 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseyeah, continue this. seems like it'd be cute. :) maybe a bit dramatic |
| KidQuarkStar 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseAw, too bad for Bree! It seems that regular girls can't get what they want! Well, I like the witty and sarcastic dialogue, and Jerry just seems to be naive to Bree's "flirtatious" ways. Like someone else said earlier, maybe if you extend the story. . . . she just might get the man! |
| Katie Saychiadu 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseLOL about the haircut. Poor Bree :( I like this as a one-shot, but if you develop it as a story, I'll be interested in that too. |
| Robynbird 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseHehe, love the ending. Sounds like a good story! |
| Cresent Moon Vampire 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseWOOT! Another great one. *does happy dance* ok. I'm done. I loved this. lol. |
| found.eventually 2008-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAH! What happened to lovey-dovey ending? XP But I liked it, anyway. It's definitely different (It is, after all, based on true event. Uhm. Sort of. Kinda. I think. Right?), and the plot flowed really well. I loved her mindless ramblings. Well done! ESPECIALLY for a first-timer! |
| breezyboo 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseug I hate my life! Your right I do always say yes dammit. I dont want to help people anymore lol. Damn my ugly hair and everyone lying to me about how it looks good. Hello James #1 we arent in the 70s #2 im not emo #3 IM NOT A BOY! |