|Reviews for Forbidden Dreams|
| akb-inactive 4/2/08 . chapter 1
First off, I would like to thank you for your review. It made me want to go to the nearest cafe and buy coffee just for the foam on top. :P
And yay! Your first story on the site! And I must say, as I'm reading it now, I cannot believe it's your first story! You must have put a lot of effort into this because it's way better than the first story I ever put out. :P
Okay, so I like the beginning. How the future seems to be the opposite of the future we expect. By this, I mean, that we expect in the future, we'll be actually having flying cars - but in this story, in the future, we'll be back to horse and carriages. Lovely idea. :)
Hmm. One sentence confused me.
[He even started in his own farmer.]
I'm sure it's just a small mistake. :P
I've alwyas liked stories with characters who have a sense of adventure in them. It's sad, because so many people in our world are contented with what are presented to them, so many people are fine with their comfort zones, and don't want to try going for newer things. So it's nice to read about a character who doesn't fit into that mold. :)
Amazing first story you've got here!