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MidnightSolstice 2008-07-24 ch 4,	abuseNice update, that guys gonna be in alotta trouble :o, I'll have to stay tuned to see what happens to him. ~Solstice
Catherine Kate 2008-07-15 ch 4,	abuseI am wondering if I would voluntarily bang Andrew's head against the wall or I will just left him suffer with guilt and jealousy... Maybe I want to do both on him. Inflict him with such physical and emotional pains to just simply teach him that pride won't make a meal for the soul. I'd say, he's a coward. But hey! I just can't let him be like that! Just now I remembered a quote I just read earlier: Don't believe that there is such a person who haven't felt jealousy and loved. Because you can't love if you can't feel jealousy. HA! I hit homerun! And yes, you did make us - me - wait for a long period of time. But what can we do? We're only readers from afar... BTW: It's quite nice. Keep the thrills. And sooner if both the protagonists won't acquaint each other, I can't see any future unless you do miracles. Hopes are still n me though. CHEERS! -catherine_kate-
Broken Dreams Of An Angel 2008-07-13 ch 4,	abuseCongrats on your beta! First thing first, This story is like makeing mye heart acke for more. And haveing both of there views is a grate idia, Reading this story remineds me of well a friend of mine, Shes well... over whigt and so am I, but exarsising and eating right no snaks time in between helps alot! Like I said this story thoucned me, I waana cry. You could make this story(After your done) Into a book and plubish it, And wala! :D You can become a wrighter! ^^ One of my most fav author is Sthepine myers who writen Twilight,New Moon,Esclips and now working on brakeing dawn, And the new relase is "The host" ^^ Hehe, Anyhow I'll be cheeking up on this story every so and then to see if its been updated, I can't get enuff of this! Anyhow keep up the good work and don't give up! Up-date soon! Ja ne (Japanesse: See ya.)
LondonLi 2008-07-12 ch 4, anon.	abuseCongrats on the beta! I think it really improves your writing! Thanks for the update.
clowneygirl 2008-07-12 ch 4,	abuseOff to an interesting start. Can't wait to read more. Update soon, please. :)
Stopdamadness 2008-07-11 ch 1,	abuseI like this story so much that I'm adding it on my favorite list.
NightlyHalo 2008-06-25 ch 3,	abusefine fine, don't gimmie beta credit =P look! a review! -catches it- =3
AKAAKAAKA 2008-04-15 ch 3, anon.	abuseA good word of advice. FINISH IT...and spell check...then review it. Cecause frankly i like this story the problem however are words like...arouend. Spell-check iha spell-check...so you better finish it. rooting for you! ^_^
MidnightSolstice 2008-04-13 ch 3,	abuseI think having Andrew's Pov is great, shows a bit of what both are going through which helps us readers understand the storyline more. Liked this chapter alot, and hope the next one is in his pov too because of your little cliffy you decided to give us. :P ~Vermillion
Catherine Kate 2008-04-12 ch 3,	abuseHaha! That was so so so good! I managed to get into your chapters after an hour reading them... I was captured by this last night only by reading its summery and I automatically added this to my FAV LIST. You didn't let me down after all. Nice job there! CHEERS! catherine_kate
duckliy543 2008-04-12 ch 3,	abuseloved it its really adorable.
NightlyHalo 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseo__o" I love it! ^_^ just send me the chapters and I'll Beta these right up ^^v
Blackened Blood 2008-04-11 ch 3,	abusei think its amazing, definatly keep Andrew's POV!
LondonLi 2008-04-11 ch 3, anon.	abuseThanks for the update. This story definitely has potential, and I'm glad that the "pretending to have a girlfriend" ploy is not being used; it's not the sort of hook that will interest her. By the way, a "beta" is an editor; someone to catch the grammer mistakes, etc. It would only improve your story, so ask around and you might find a good one!:) Good luck!
black ennui 2008-04-07 ch 2,	abusethe change in the last statement from the first chapter made it less freaky. :p im happy to see you decided to not make it a one-shot anymore! i failed to remember reading that from the summary... but all's good. i like the pace at how things are unfolding. keep updating!

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