Reviews for A Walk in the Rain

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singing gravity away 2008-07-25 ch 26,	abuseAw poor Dan! He so tormented with the past! And he doesn't really know how to let anyone help him... That really is a sad situation, that Dan's family could never get over the loss of Ryan. I hope that somehow in this story, healing will come not just to Dan, and to Allison, but to their whole family. I wonder how Bekah is going to approach Dan? Well anyways, update soon! And I was wondering if you could do me a favor? I like your writing style, the way you incorporate faith into the story line. If it wouldn't be too much to ask of you, could you read the first couple of chapter of my story entitled 'clay within your hands', and tell me what you think of it so far? It's the only story on my profile, so it's not too hard to find! LOL. It would help me out a lot!
Lady R 2008-07-25 ch 26,	abuseWow! Dan's letter made me consider my own relationship with my sisters. This was really a great chapter. I'm so moved that I'm pretty much speechless at the moment. Update soon. BTW, I love that Barbara Streisand's and Celine Dion's song. Makes me want to dance by candlelight with my husband.
StrawberryKisses08 2008-07-25 ch 26,	abuseSo he's not cutting off ties again? GOOD! =D
Lady Knight 1512 2008-07-24 ch 26,	abuseI DID like it. I liked it VERY much. It was so moving and sad and beautiful, all at the same time. Personally, i believe it's one of your best chapters, so that's something to be happy about. I liked Bekah's strength in this chapter. She straight out refused to let Allie continue to do these things to herself. However, i also loved Dan's quiet vulnerability. "I don't know what the hell I'm doing, Rose." And then, he kind of just trails off. It says so much, and it's so unlike Dan that it just heightens the emotion of the chapter. The song Allie played really fit as well, and added a nice contrast to the song in Dan's letter. It all just fit together so well. I loved this. I completely adored it. I can't wait to read the next chapter, so i hope you'll update again soon. ~ Marie
singing gravity away 2008-07-22 ch 25,	abuseThank goodness. For a second there, at the end, I thought Bekah was actually going to have sex with Dan! Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter. I loved seeing Jim a christian, and Bekah was so sweet. Taking care of everyone. Thanks for updating, and I hope you do it again soon!
LadyArrin 2008-07-19 ch 25,	abuseThat just broke my heart. Sounds very similar to conversations I've had in the past. Oh dear. =/
hija de jesucristo 2008-07-18 ch 25,	abuseit's good and there should totally be more but there's not pout (lol)
Phantom'sLuv 2008-07-18 ch 25,	abuseAw, damn. Complications suck >:\ Keep it going! AMAZING! ~Phantom'sLuv
Lady Knight 1512 2008-07-18 ch 25,	abuseOh wow. I LOVED it! The tension and emotion in the second half of this chapter was almost unbearable! I thought you handled it very well. I also liked the extra thoughts you added to show Bekah's uncertainty. They added just that little bit to make it more believeable. I'm curious to know about Dan's nightmare. Bekah had nightmares too, as i recall. But now i'm more concerned about Dan than ever. He really IS having a breakdown. It's a disaster! Still, at least he can admit he wants her, which is as it should be. I'd rather Bekah than Denise any day. Of course, i want to read more, so please update soon! I'm enjoying this, even though Dan's behaviour freaks me out. ~Marie
vitreous 2008-07-18 ch 25,	abusehehehe. Yay for Good Dan! :D I don't like how he keeps almost cheating on Denise though. I can't wait to see how everything turns out. Keep up the great work!
Lady R 2008-07-18 ch 25,	abuseI'm confused about that bedroom scene. I mean what gives? That was terrible of Dan to build up Bekah's nerves like that. But with his current situation, this just reiterates his current turmoil, I guess. I bet if he did that to Denise, she would have ripped off that towel. lol But then again, maybe that's why he did it to Bekah, because he knew she wouldn't. Anyway, I am glad that Dan has not pushed Bekah away yet. I hope she will be able to help Dan before Denise pushes her out of the picture, which would be Denise's right, if you think about it, as long as that engagement ring is still on her finger. Speaking about Denise, I'm curious to see more of POV. She is turning out to be a more complex character than the typical spoiled rich girl. Although I shouldn't be surprised about her complexity. Your characters are rarely one-deminsional which makes your stories so appealing. I would love to see how Dan will eventually put her in her place. Knowing little about her abnormal childhood, he probably will not just brush her off and send her packing, even if the thought of it is rather appealing. I never thought I would even want you to explore her character, but that other chapter with her and Oliver really got me curious. Shame on you! I'm supposed to be focusing on only Bekah and Dan, the main characters. lol Have a great weekend! ~R
StrawberryKisses08 2008-07-18 ch 25,	abuseGAH! Get rid of Denise, Dan, and go back to Becka D=
vitreous 2008-07-18 ch 24,	abuseI loved this chapter SO much! You're an awesome writer. I'm really sorry about your brother. :( I'll pray for you.
hija de jesucristo 2008-07-15 ch 24,	abuseyay i loved it too is pretty you're good so what's next?!
notreal17 2008-07-13 ch 24,	abusei really like this story. i have read a lot of your 'rose' stories but this by far is the one i like the best!

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