Reviews for A Walk in the Rain

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katelyn 2008-09-21 ch 29, anon.	abuseoh my god. Im in love with this story. It is amazing. Ireally hope u continue soon!
MidnightWonder 2008-08-25 ch 1,	abuseIt's about time to update this one again don't you think? This is going really well, don't leave us hanging.
Geminiwriter93 2008-08-17 ch 29,	abuseHey this story is amazing! I love your stories so much, can't wait for Part 2! update soon!
angelblissjoy 2008-08-15 ch 29,	abusehi i love this story please update soon cant seem to wait take care keep up the good work
cheergurl12 2008-08-14 ch 29, anon.	abusehow many parts will there be? how often will you updae cause I avsolutly love this story and the first one? one other question how come your story young teacher has the same exactnames as this one??
Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-08-13 ch 29,	abuseGreat Job! I really love this story so far. It's great. Um... UPDATE SOON
Phantom'sLuv 2008-08-12 ch 29,	abuseyay! She told him she loved him! :D Woo hoo! Write more, please? ~Phantom'sLuv
Tiffany 2008-08-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseAlright so I just read both stories about Rose and Dan and all I can say is WHERE THE HELL IS PART II! lol Im sorry but i feel like ive waited a million years for them to be together openly and not afraid and I think they can finally do it now! Rose can help him out of this slump like he helped her. I love these stories and Im dying to find out what happens! update son please! :)
vitreous 2008-08-04 ch 28,	abuse=O I can't wait for the next one! Great job! :D
Lady R 2008-08-01 ch 28,	abuseMy favorite line is, "I guess I'm going to have to call off the wedding". I really, really loved this chapter! I'm so proud of Bekah for her courage throughout the story actually, but especially in this chapter. Again, it shows how much she has matured, and I love it. I also like how Jim provided the comic relief here with his "Kissy, kissy, kissy" remark. That was hilarious. I'm so happy right now, even though I know more hardship is to come. Like Denise's reaction when Dan calls off the wedding--will he do it right away, or will circumstances arrive that will have him putting it off, dealing with little Billy, finding Alice, helping Allison to recoup, etc. I have a feeling that the questions at the end were put there to hint to the upcoming trials. This was a great way to end Part I of this story.
Lady R 2008-08-01 ch 27,	abuseHi! I love how you evoke the other characters into the story. I get so focused on Dan and Bekah and then something happens and I'm telling myself, "oh yeah, they're in the story too." But the transition is done really well and the story continue to flow nicely. And you are so good at building up the suspense and creating those intense moments. Just when the intensity between the two are about the explode, the doorbell rings and just deflates the moment. I love it!! And to top it off, the result of the interuption is just as intense with the baby left at the doorstep. Ok, on to the next chapter!! BTW, I did not watch Grease 2 last night, but I kept giggling to myself as I couldn't get "Cool Rider" out of my head! :P
hija de jesucristo 2008-07-30 ch 28,	abusep.s. is prettiful!
hija de jesucristo 2008-07-30 ch 29,	abusemEH! is that it? the end? or is there one more chapter? i'm confused! if there's another chapter, write fast?!
XxXAngels-of-the-DarkXxX 2008-07-30 ch 29,	abuseOMG! I'm soo loving this story! You have submit another chapter soon! I soo would love to see Dan and Rebekah bickering on how to take care of the child! Cuz we al know that both dan and bekah have different views on somethings... I would love to see some interaction between dan and bekah and the lil baby... o i can't wait! pls continue the great work!
Estelin 2008-07-30 ch 28,	abusethis was great. i can not wait for more. keep up the good work and writing jen.

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