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touchofchaos 2008-06-11 ch 5, anon.	abusei know that easton and adrien like daine and everything but when easton said he didn't want to leave daine after graduation i couldn't help butfeel that adrien was being left out. i mean easton and adrien don't really act like they're good friends. i think the pairing here is daine and easton cuz daine is obviously attracted to him, but it sucks that adrien is attracted to daine and she won't return his feelings... i dunno if what i said made sense at all... -TOC
Sea Delane 2008-06-01 ch 5,	abuseIncredible! I don't know your age, but I love this piece... you have got to keep with this gift, I am a fan for life! (It is such a toss up between the two... whatever is going to come of all this... ooh what delicious choices!) ;)
deny.me.not 2008-05-22 ch 5,	abuseAwe, Daine's so clueless, she's actually a really cute character, AND SO ARE ADRIEN AND EASTON. I feel so bad for Adrien and Easton about their parents :( I really wonder what happens between the three of them later on. Update soon. -dmn.
laughing.through.tears 2008-05-21 ch 5,	abuseHey! Loved it. I thought the spice names were really cool (they were what made me start reading) but they don't seem to actually have anything to do with the story. Explain? Update soon.
KatieTheWriter 2008-05-20 ch 5,	abuseThe closing line was awesome: He was fighting a losing battle, with denial as his shield. Loved it! I hope I don't have to wait long for the next update! I love this story so much and have to know what happens! Not to pressure you or anything... :-) Please update soon! This was a great chapter filled with lots of stress and life issues. KatieTheWriter
my own prince 2008-05-17 ch 5,	abuseWhat I like is how, despite Adrien seems so carefree, you show that he actually isn't. I mean, he probably is a happy-go-lucky person, but since all these responsibilities keep going to him, he has to be a father-figure, whether he wants to or not..? Am I making sense? Great chapter. good character development is one of your best skills!
Sey 2008-05-15 ch 5, anon.	abuseWell, I kinda understand Easton there. My problems were slightly different but the main thing about not being able to do what you really want is the same. Hope he gets out of the same fate I had haha. Oh, did you enjoy S'pore?
Just Keep Living 2008-05-15 ch 5,	abusefirst of all, I love you! If I havent freaked you out and you're still reading this review, what I meant to say is that I..love you! But not in a creepy, stalkery way! Lol, I've kinda just been a lurker here, and this is my first ever review to anyone, so and who else better to review than you? OMFG, i love your stories! anywayz yeah, awesome chapter and update soon! haha.
iB3ck 2008-05-13 ch 5, anon.	abuseAww this made me excited and sad,i wonder whts gonna happen when its time to leave everyone behind
RandiRose 2008-05-13 ch 5,	abuseAaww, that's so sweet! I hate growing up too. I miss the good 'ole days or what I like to call the 'Golden Years' when things were much simpler. Oh, Singapore! Where's that again? I wish I could travel outside my country...jealous you have a 'fthe' in the very beginning
found.eventually 2008-05-13 ch 5,	abuseI actually kinda liked Adrian's mum, and I don't really know why. She's pushing herself too much right now. But I also feel kinda sad for Carrie. I mean, she has the rights to know about this, doesn't she? But gosh, I loved the cat-ears part! Easton, I mean, just imagine a hot guy (or ANY guy, for the matter)with ears. And whiskers. Saying 'meow'. Oh God. I don't think I can handle it. HAHAHA. Loved the chapter, by the way. :)
Victoria 2008-05-12 ch 5, anon.	abuseOh, one thing I noticed, pretty funny actually, Adrien's mom has dark hair while he and his sister have blond hair. That's always cool, how you write those little details in.
Victoria 2008-05-12 ch 4, anon.	abuseI like how you give us depth into their friendship. It shows that they've been there for each other for a long time, and how hard it'll be for them when they will be separated.
Deborahs-Conscience 2008-05-11 ch 5,	abusesquee! omgomg,,yey! new chappy! =D Very nice. two different perspectives. Looks like Eastons liked her for a while and Adrien is jsut coming to terms with liking here. But both have denile! Hmm, if i keep ranting like this i might write a whole analysis for it! yikes! thats what school does for ya. lol. Have a good one, Deborah (from Aust)
misery sister 2008-05-11 ch 5,	abuseThe ending line was awesome. And I could just picture Easton and that cat eared headband. Very, very cute.

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