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Reviews For: Uncivil War

fatbird33
2008-06-21
ch 1,
abuseyou always have the BEST topics for poems, and for that i give a standing ovation. fantastic once again. i think it's time for soem favoritivness!
painted.music
2008-04-01
ch 1,
abusekonban wa

Wow. *blinks* Wow... that was stunningly beautiful; I loved it. I'm about to learn the Civil War in school (for what feels like the millionth time in my life, might I add?), and I just love the way you wrote this. Love. I'm going to show it to my teacher when we start learning it. :D Lovely. I love the parts that stress the fact that the families are being split apart, fighting each other:

"wives, don't worry about your husbands, / even if they are the reason for your sons' deaths."

"strange country (countries?) we have"

"off to war they went, and off to doom they fell."

Stunning. I am appropriately stunned.

Ha det
-Shan-
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