i loved your story how come you stopped posting your story was awesome

I really like it! The one thing is did you change the name of the gay guy friend from Jason to Mark?

I really like the story. I am a little confused as to who James is though.

This is a really good story to me. Please finish writing it and postin it! If I try to finish it, it definately wouldn't be that good. Please finish writing!

Good story but I must tell you this right now. DO. NOT. APOLOGISE. The readers do get over it and so - eventually - does the writer. You have no reason to apologise. Losing interest in a story is really common for writers. Even me, the "oh, so great and powerful Volurin" (just kidding), frequently. The only advice I can give you for having an interest in this story again is to try writing in a different area - be it your parents bedroom, or your dog's kennel (not advised). You could also try writing another story. That might recapture your interest but who knows. Everyone is different.

Keep on writing, kiddo.

Volurin out.

Im so glad you updated this story i can't wait until the next chapter

Oh! I was so happy to see this story updated! Great chapter. Keep up the good work! Please update soon... I want to know who's at the door. Hahaha.

P.S. Yes, you do delete the docs you don't need. :)

Oh, co captain. And good cliffhanger too, cant wait.

JM

How come it is you seem to update during the school year. I would have figured you'd updated more during the summer! I guess you've been playing "hook up" and "Avatar High" with all the "lady friends" ;) ha! See at school in like a few hours!

Yay an update, good job on the writing & punctuation!

Vermillion

yes! new chapter!

for me i dont really care how long tha chapter is, as long asits good..

excpet it cant be TO Short cuas ethen i have tow air forver for the next one..

update..

Good chap! Update soon!

!SS!

I like the way you write your story. There are a few minor mistakes, like some words are missing, but I kind of get what you were going to say anyway. (my brain filled in the gaps). Besides that you're doing great! Keep it up!

They so do have a shot dont they. I cant wait for the tryouts.

JM

For some reason (not that i dont like your other story at all ,the "Fat Chance" one ) I like this story way better..

it says your last update was "Updated: 04-20-08 " how abour you update it soon and post it up:)? please?:(