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Catseye*Rose
2008-05-01
ch 1,
abuseMechanics: Myriad

Originality: Raven Kay

Best: Myriad
Thoth
2008-04-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseOk, excluding my piece, here's the votes:

Mechanics: Myriad
Originality: BlackCat
Best:Myriad
Lenari Soto
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseAlright, voting.

Mechanics: BlackCat
Originality: Chiomi
Best: Myriad
Lenari Soto
2008-04-24
ch 11,
abuseI'm intrigued and definitely awaiting the next chapter!
Lenari Soto
2008-04-24
ch 10,
abuse"...he has better things to do, he is an important man with an important **—and then he starts accusing me of trying to arrange his marriage! Are you allowed to institutionalize someone for being an insufferable man?”

BEST. LINE. EVER.

This is amazing.

When are you writing more?!
Lenari Soto
2008-04-24
ch 9,
abuseThis was very cute, and the tone was lovely. I'm intrigued as well.
Lenari Soto
2008-04-24
ch 8,
abuseThe concept was interesting, but I feel it wasn't developed enough. It was quite realistic, though.
Lenari Soto
2008-04-24
ch 6,
abuseI feel like it left me hanging and I'm not completely sure how I feel about that. However, it's a very interesting idea, and I'd like to see what happens next.
Lenari Soto
2008-04-24
ch 5,
abuseI'm saddened for Reg, and would like to see more at some point. It's interesting.
Lenari Soto
2008-04-24
ch 4,
abuseVery interesting! I liked the images a lot, and I'd definitely like to see what's going on with Madie later on.
Lenari Soto
2008-04-24
ch 3,
abuseDark, painful, beautiful. You managed to make it connect even past the dark subject matter... excellent!
Lenari Soto
2008-04-24
ch 2,
abuseI love the idea for this a lot! And the tone was lovely.
Myriadragon
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseA lot of very creative ideas this month, but also a lot of glaring errors in terms of grammar, etc...

Mechanics: BlackCat
Originality: Chiomi
Best: Lenari Soto
Myriadragon
2008-04-23
ch 2,
abuseA bit rough around the edges, but amusing. I do love the "Strange Disease" bit.
Chiomi
2008-04-22
ch 7,
abuseI would have liked more about the world put in, but it was sweet.
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