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| Jacoby.Rae.Grace 2008-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseOh, how terribly cryptic. I love it. =] chek it, JRG |
| Naomi Schemer 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseWelcome back, you've been missed. Naturally you have to come back on a somber note, huh? It's an interesting psychological situation you described here. I don't feel much sympathy towards the narrator, to tell the truth...I don't think I'm meant to. Anyway, I hope this isn't going to be another 3 month wait for the next story, although I can be patient. I wouldn't want you to overwork yourself, now would I? |
| Faith Adeline 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abusewow, good job. very strong, solid piece. Keep it up :) Faith |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abusethis was slightly confusing but I loved it all the same. sorta something poetic about it too. and full of imagery. creative indeed. |
| firestar267 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this, it was so touching and very well written. The last line had a great impact on the whole thing. |
| Cinera 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseThat's one of the most amazing things I've ever read. I'm sad that it's only a one-shot, because you could do a lot with it. Great job. |