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| recycle rhymes 2008-04-08 ch 1,  | abusepretty...i like the imagery and diction of the words flowing together. so carefully weaved. nice work! |
| boys kiss girls 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abusei love the line "(smells like honey & feels like rain)". i wonder what it would be like to feel like rain. i bet it's a very freeing experience. this whole poem screams freedom and it's beautiful. |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abusethat's brilliant. |
| jack0of0spades 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseWow. I liked this. Absolutely no criticisms, although I honestly try to include one in all of my reviews. Good job! |