I liked it a lot, just what I was looking for as I begin writing-up my OWN old story revolving around mechs and alien invaders! Very inspirational...

SympleSymon

PS: "Battle Metal: Genesis" is the name of my story...give it a look when it's up...?

Wow- I'm mad you put that picture there. :-p

Anyhoo I'm glad your still writing good for you. This sounds interesting- a little scifi mix. Hm Tran's name sounds kinda..intriuging. And haha at "Lover's spat". Cool


adakua

Love, love, love! Your style of writing keeps me wanting more, and your characters personalities fit together well. Keep it up. :)

This is a very good story so far. I don't have anything up yet, but I will soon. I'm currently working on it. Hope you continue soon with this.

I'm interested; need I say more?

~Spirit Tigress

This definitely sounds good. I'd love to see more of it.