this sounds fun :) can't wait for you to update

you have GOT to update this story soon :D


I LOVE it! i can't tell u ho many times i've said "aw" hile reading it,lol.

big points for Seamus for the Tiffany ring. I can understand Jordan's apprehension a little bit but she needs to find something to cope with it. i know you are done so i am waiting as patiently as i can for the next update.

yah! I am so excited that Jordan came thru. I absolutely love how Seamus asked her parents permission first, it's soo romantic. oh i just can't wait for the next update.

Adorable yet ridiculous couple, as always.

I miss BrenSO. Make him come faster by updating.

Awwe. That was beautiful. Usually the guy not really big on having kids and that's why I love Seamus. He knows what he wants and goes for it even if he has to fight and yell for it. I cannot wait for the next update.

Woot! Love it! Can't wait to see what happens next...

And the pill is 100 per cent effective if taken the right way lol. I like your writing style!

Argh this is a good story and i love jordan but seamus seems really chauvinistic to me. Like he only cares about being with a woman who wants his babies.

i friggin' love this story. love, love, love the characters! finally a realistic leading black chick. awesome mouth on her, cuz she sounds like me! LoL this story is awesome and i can't wait to see more of it. keep it going!

They can't break up. I thought the summary said that they would have start a family so I am very confused. They love each other but both are being very stubborn. Love or even a relationship requires compromise on both sides and neither will settle for less than what they want. They need to see each other's point of view before they call it quits. Loves sometimes comes only once, sometimes never so when you have it you can't let it go no matter how hard.

i feel really sad about this, i hope the next chapter will cheer me up

I am so excited that you started updating again. I didn't read this story before do I don't know what it going to happen and am anxious for the next update. Keep updating when ever you get a chance. I cannot wait for Jordan's answer to Seamus' question.

Keep posting. I miss this story dearly.

i stumbled on your story, i really like it. i think you are doing a good job and this could evolve into somthing great. hope u get loads of reviews