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Reviews For: Five Times He Saves Her and One Time He Doesn’t
Maida 2008-10-14 . chapter 2
Wow, this is dark, and powerfully emotional. It's really good.
girl-in-america 2008-05-26 . chapter 2
No! You made me cry again! It was really well written and everything but blah...now I need a tissue.
CaFFy 2008-04-23 . chapter 2
Aw.
CaFFy 2008-04-23 . chapter 1
It kind of reminds me of this time I posted seven ways I might die over the course of a week. o.O;

It's um... interesting.
Sarah 2008-04-23 . chapter 2
This is really an outstanding story. One of the very, very few I choose to review.
In my opinion, you are almost overwhelmingly precise with the suicidal thoughts and detail. It really impresses me, and in a strange way, makes me smile.

Your story really tugged at my heart, and that's difficult to do at the moment. Thanks for sharing it.
Bellafibs 2008-04-23 . chapter 2
Aw, I loved this. Very well written. The Epilogue was a real tear-jerker, but I kept my self together :)

~KarB
heartfeltlove 2008-04-22 . chapter 1
This was really good!
You portrayed dani's feelings very well!
SMALLwhitelies 2008-04-07 . chapter 1
Bullet to the Head --> what was going through my head. I review for joo! I liked it, dunno why others don't review. Then again this is ficpress and no one knows about it.

On another note: STEP AWAY FROM DEATH'S DOORSTEP AND TRY TO FIND SOMETHING WORTH WHILE IN LIFE. It may take a while but I know that something is out there. And I don't mean aliens.
Bandgeek111 2008-04-06 . chapter 1
I think it's very well written, considering you wrote this at night. My favorite is the alcohol poisoning and the electrocution. Each section seemed to be delving into all the possibilities of a human mind at its worst.
girl-in-america 2008-04-05 . chapter 1
W-what?
But Robert obviously loved her. Isn't that enough to live for?
It was great, but a tearjerker.
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