 One-Hand Clap 2008-04-19 . chapter 1Haha! I loved this! Isn't it the damnedest thing when you write something good but forget it?! I liked this poem because I could relate to it, and I think most writers (whether poets or not) can understand the greif over losing a piece that you considered good. I also loved the humour used in it, because it wasn't a downer poem, it was simply a passing thought... So there's two things I loved about it.
- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon (link in my profile) |
 Basara 2008-04-05 . chapter 1haha! good thing that was only for that moment... mine is a syndrome... lol
nice... |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2008-04-03 . chapter 1Ha! That was fantastic. I love tongue in cheek humor like this. Very very nice. Definitely have to add this one to my faves. Keep writing! :) |
 Chidori Nadare 2008-04-02 . chapter 1LOL! It made me smile 'cause I can relate to it. Funny and simple =)
-C.N |
 metatextual 2008-04-02 . chapter 1haha i like it
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 boys kiss girls 2008-04-02 . chapter 1This makes me smile. It reminds me of a song. A song with the attitude "it was cool, can't remember it, moving on..." and I visualize some guy walking down a busy city street (New York comes to mind) and it's all good.
I also like how you didn't start it with "I". It comes off as... you're cool enough for everyone to know who you're talking about (and you are that cool :D). |
 Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-02 . chapter 1Haha!
This made me smile sheepishly because I can completely relate.
Nice and simple. |