PLEASE! Please finish All I Have to Give. I love it.

In Life of a teenage Heartthrob Garret seems too cold and unapprochable. Also, its easyier for him to get to know Taylor if he is her tutor. How else is he supposed to find out why Taylor is sad most of the time? Also, Garret shows more emotion in All I Have to Give than just anger. In Life of a Teenage Heartthrob Garret is too guarded. I

In the story All I Have to Give Garret could go to a end of year soccer party and become jealous of Taylor and Matt that way.

If you do decide to keep writing Life of a Teenage Heartthrob please change the najmes back to what they were in the original. It's too confusing when you think wait...Matt's character is now called Noah?

So... please consider!

Personally I like AIGH better, especially since it's gotten so far. Please oh please ust finish AIGH It's so darling.

haha why did he mention taylor's name? ohoho lol

hmm is it taylor? lol

I really enjoyed reading this, but I have to admit I liked the first version better. The characters in this version seemed more stereotypical. I liked Taylor better in AIHTG because she seemed less one-dimensional and some insecurities (maybe it's because there's only been two chaps on this one).

Anyway I really love your stories and hope you update soon!

im not sure which one i like better...lol..maybe this rewrite..but natalia seems a lot more psychotic than the old version...and garrett's parents are like the hendersen parents in myrika's stories...

AH!
yes amazing amazing amazing!

Update soon!

i liked the first one better. this one is good, but i feel it is still lacking. i like how garrett and taylor met in your first version. it had more of a teenage vibe to it...and the way he was getting to know her was good too. what i want to know is why didn't you like it? it was really interesting. better story line. will you still do the tutor thing? it was a cool idea.

He is so totally crushing on Taylor! He's just in denial! Update again soon! And yes there are fouls in soccer usually resulting in corner kicks, goal kicks, control of the ball, yellow cards or red cards.

nice. but i think i like the old version more.