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Reviews For: A Kiss

1Wanderer
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuseSimple but effective. I would try to use some punctuation to increase the effect but it was still very good. :)
Basara
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abusethe pinnacle of rebirth to someone's arms...

nice...
Shadows in the Fire
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE this poem! The summery grabbed my attention.

-Shadow
Tranquil Thorns
2008-04-02
ch 1,
abuseLovely haiku.

The second line was probably my favorite. It put me in mind of magic love potions. =P
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