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Reviews For: A Kiss
sTrive 2008-04-26 . chapter 1
Simple but effective. I would try to use some punctuation to increase the effect but it was still very good. :)
Basara 2008-04-05 . chapter 1
the pinnacle of rebirth to someone's arms...

nice...
Shadows in the Fire 2008-04-02 . chapter 1
I LOVE this poem! The summery grabbed my attention.

-Shadow
Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-02 . chapter 1
Lovely haiku.

The second line was probably my favorite. It put me in mind of magic love potions. =P
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