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| 1Wanderer 2008-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseSimple but effective. I would try to use some punctuation to increase the effect but it was still very good. :) |
| Basara 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abusethe pinnacle of rebirth to someone's arms... nice... |
| Shadows in the Fire 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE this poem! The summery grabbed my attention. -Shadow |
| Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abuseLovely haiku. The second line was probably my favorite. It put me in mind of magic love potions. =P |