I love the imagery, very beautiful.

I like!

The three stanza poem tell a story, and that's really good - your poem's not a string of pretty words, it really does mean something.

Perhaps you didn't need "untained and untouched" I mean, chaste and pure kinda said it all.

How about swapping the lines "they steal away" and "concealed by the light of the stars" that might back the last stanza flow a bit better??

Narq.

This is a really beautiful poem. I love the imagery it evokes. I love the backwards lines, such as chaste were her hands; pure were her lips . . . dark was her lover; bold was his heart. The idea of them running away together is lovely. Although I hope his darkness does not taint her pureness. ^_^ Simply splendid!

Cassandra

Excellent light/dark imagery.

that was a good poem. short but good.

I like this. Very solid, good piece. good job.
Faith