This was absolutely beautiful. :) There was this... hushed, breathless sort of feel to this piece. I'm not very good at reviewing poetry because it's hard to criticize something that's so personal, but I liked this a lot for its simplicity. You really know how to combine just the right words for lovely atmospheres and tones and images. :)

Wow, such innocent and blissful imagery =)
Amazing what a great scene simple words can create ^^
Well done!
~fleur

i always love poetry. there was always something magical about it. like this. :)

I read all of your pieces, and this is my favorite. I can tell that all of the lines are well thought out... they put your message across perfectly!

its magical, cute, the imagery about an angel is lovely.