Very good, very ravishing my friend. Theres such passion and emotion infused into yor words, almost feeling the anguish and strain of this "music" of yours, just as we follow the beat of our own.
Incredible...

I REALLY loved this. I'm not sure what it was, but the moment I started reading it, it just jumped out at me. There was no real rhyme, yet it flows so naturally. Great job! *favorites*