Reviews for The Bird and Flower

fatbird33 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abusebeautiful. seriously i liked it a lot. bravo
simpleplan13 2008-04-04 ch 1,	abusefluttering around--graceful/as it ever was--stopping to...something about that part in dashes just sounded awkward... sorry I cant be more descriptive than that, but it just struck me as odd feed upon the delicious nectar... feeding might sound better since you have fluttering and stopping The transition from the metaphor into the meaning was a bit odd for me... because you say fellow men, but it was a bird. It just didn't go very smoothly, but other than that I really liked the metaphor. Going from something so beautiful to something so sad and horrible was really great.
Kiwi-kiwi6 2008-04-02 ch 1,	abuseSarcastic, but somewhat hard to understand. Well written. ~kiwikiwi