Haha, funny and sexy! Props for you! Update soon.

i ttly heart this fanfic

Hahahaa. That was simply amazing. I'm curious. Which bit did you write?
Lolz. Got a few odd looks from laughing so hard.
Woo.
Write more, sooner.
--Phaith.
PS. Also, good job, Karate.

Firstly, how did they suddenly become "boyfriends"? Just previous chapter they were bestfriends - none of them asked the other out, right ?!? I'm totally confused ! Besides that, I honestly did not like this chapter all too much..threesomes are, for me at least, eww... Fuck Charlie, ma-an ! *swears, screaming..before realizing - whupz! Children will hear..*

HAHHA! This was funny as hell. I loved it. Is it done? I certainly hope not. These were great.

Their reactions to everything is funny.

ooh aree ya gonna write moree?
I liked this it was fun xD
update soon
please and thank youu
Lucia x

Okay thier being watch and that's creepy. I'm not liking this stalker girl. But they could be a little less obvious, gosh! Classrooms are not the place. They have nympho problems.

Now if only they could get home where there are no interruptions.

I love it that Eldon is messing with Dylan in CLASS ! It is actually hilarious..I lo-ove sexual tension :P And also I love how the writer of the story keeps appearing in the end..to show how they got the story. Btw, since this is going on like a series..will it continue to be the same? It would be fun if so..and even if not, it'll be fun, tho'! However, it'll be nice to find out that even one of them is gay...complications are always..good :D Nahh, great !

I like the fact that Dylan feel absolutely helpless to Eldon sucking him off...he does not want to, but he does - very interesting chemistry! However, the first paragraph was a little bit confusing because it was a little bit difficult to understand which "he" was which he. Ha! That made a lot of sense, right?

But, overall..good job! Am off to review the next "drabble" !

Very Hot! lol. I'm curious about that dark-haired girl.

"forward, impaling the dark-haired boy with his cock over and over" Should be light-haired boy. Eldon is the Brunette, Dylan the blonde.

If this was inspired by your school I totally want to transfer. Yay! For lemons, and sexiness! I smiled at the end along with that girl. I hope this is not a one shot, I demand this not be a one shot! okay I beg this not be a one shot. Okay hugs! Write more! Please?