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| lacy-9 2008-07-22 ch 6,  | abuseoh my! that was harsh. i really like adrian, even though he isnt the nicest person, i think he was just raised to be a spoiled. i kinda wish that you would have picked another name for him though, i feel like adrian is a common name used for guys in alot of stories. but a name doesnt change an amazing plot or story!! i really do like how this story is going and i cant wait for you to update! :] |
| smexisam 2008-07-08 ch 6, | abuseUpdate soon Please? 8) |
| creativeness 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseI have two words: please update |
| Lulu Jones 2008-06-15 ch 6, | abuseThis rocks!! And I tried to tell myself NOT to like Adrian, but I can't. I'm falling for him already. LOL |
| ClaimingUntoughable 2008-06-06 ch 6, | abusehey love this chapter i hope u can write more soon i love it |
| Ella Brie 2008-06-05 ch 6, | abuseHey, I love your story. Update really soon ;) ~ Ella |
| Esquirella 2008-06-05 ch 6, | abuseWow! This a cool story! I guess Danielle is in for more big surprises, huh? |
| junebug62194 2008-06-04 ch 6, | abuseThis is a really good story. I hope you will update soon. If it isn't too much, will you please check out either of my stories? I know it is stupid but it would show if I am getting better. |
| charles0702 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abusewow, this is one of the best fic i have read.. please update.. i love danielle's personality.. |
| Lunarity loves Kouji 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuse♥ WOW! That was great so far! Please update soon! xoxo, Lunarity |
| CRAZY FOR APPLES 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseOMG! That was a little intense at the end... can't wait for the update :) |
| roxymarlatinfire 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseawesome chapter! I guess there's a lot of secretes in the family...updates soon ^^ (not putting presure on ye) |
| Sura Kiyina 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseThis story is better than I expected, hope to see more updates soon. |
| dreamercrys 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseOkay, glad she didn't jump...she fell. When is she gonna stop being such a witch? Good chapter...I'll be ing patient in my waiting this time...I promise... ;) |
| huusasster 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseAw, poor Danielle! She has to marry that brute ape! The story sounds interesting and I can't wait till the next update; happy writing :) |