I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

i really love this story! The way you right izzy, though calculating and passionate, she grasps the readers hearts as a different kind of heroine, one even more human than the more 'nice and perfect' characters that are everywhere. It's brilliant to be given the perspective of such a unique character and i loved it in this chapter how she looked after her sister by threatening that guy, even though her and ruby don't get along. I can't wait to see more of those story twists because i think izzy as a character can pull them off. Please don't give up on this story. :D

I have mixed feelings about this. You've obviously got a knack for writing; there's a reason why I have this favorited.

However, the complexity that drew me in from the prologue is almost a bit too much to handle. Actually, I'm not sure if complexity is the right term. What I'm trying to say is that there's too much going on.

There is a disjointed-ness to this story that, if toned down, would be charming. Unfortunately, I'm 8 chapters in and still feel that the whole gist to this story is spinning on the hamster wheel and eluding me in the process. Keep down the side plots, secrets, and hints, and focus more on forming a coherence to the story. Without a main plot sort of feel, this won't go very far. Also, Izzy is an interesting enough protagonist, but she needs more character development beyond her ** streak.

Hope this helps, and keep up the great work. :)

-S

Story is pretty complex, alot of little side stories =) keeps it iteresting. But abit more, and it might get all too much and confusing.

Tension! Sheesh haha, enticing chapter =)

I can just feel the spark about to hit the air, the story is going to get thrilling! Update soon ...pwease?
lol

Sometimes, I picture Iz as a guy, sitting low on her seat, eating at people's pain haha. She is quite sexy when she is mean particularly in the Jamie Knight scene. (She is mean most times but the other scenes mainly are of her cunning tactics and that, not outright unforgiving etc).

I'm a girl too (not a les, and nothing against them)but it doesn't matter, anyone can be sexy =P

I think her reactions and reasons for not going out was due to her mothers photo thing, but that scene was abit out of 'flow'. It dint seem right in this context, abit strange

This may be something trivial but I like how Isobel is shortened to Iz or Izzy, not Bella (like so many other fictions and ahem, Twilight). I hope you do update soon on this, the story's got a sense of 'hanging in the air' feeling, I am intrigued, and anticipating how it will all turn out =)

I liked this chapter. It was a little short though.

I like how she told Hutchungs off and how you didn't make it so her sster saw it.

Don't give up! I have faith in you!

update asap

i would love to see more of this story! it's going well and because not much of izzy is really being revealed, i would like to see more.

i really don't believe she is a ** just because she can be.

I LOVE THIS STORY! It's just soo... god! I can't help liking Izzy! she's so awesome!

Iz is a very clever girl, I like her! she's a cool character.
chapter was good but kind of dragged on for me. and sometimes I don't understand what some of the characters are trying to say.

I'm on o the next chapter!

I really like this story it's so intriguing!
but I have a question; is Ruby younger or older than Izzy?

hey
just read your story and i loved it.
you need to update!plz... i need to know more.
anyway i want izzy and Michael to be together. cuz lauren and jake seem so cute with each other. Anyway izzy and Michael would be perfect, both stubborn, both dont take crap from others, so it would be fun.

anyway its a great story and i hope you continue it!!


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