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| angel953 2008-04-10 ch 1,  | abuseaw this is so sweet! i love it! i wish i knew who this was about...i command ou to tell me next time i see you lol nice work!! |
| fatbird33 2008-04-02 ch 1, | abusei liked the first two lines. |
| WriterXO 2008-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought this poem was very good. I really liked it and enjoyed reading it. However, I would like to make one suggestion which to get rid of "&" which you have in the very beginning. The only reason I say that is because it throws the reader off when first getting into the poem. Other than that good job. =) |