|Reviews for C R A S H|
| In the Rye 5/1/08 . chapter 1
interesting. a little cliche.
it seems most of your poetry is striving for something thats not quite in it, yet. i don't know why i think that. but it's the feeling i get from reading your work.
i think if you keep working you can get something really good.
| socks-lost 4/4/08 . chapter 1
This is really good. You think there will be a kind-of-sortta happy ending but there's not. The spelling out crash was neat. and I liked the first stanza the best. your writting is really expressive its kooll. keep up the good work.
| Jennifer 4/3/08 . chapter 1
This is my fav of your work so far. I'm insanely Jelous of the people on here. And i thought my work was okay...Mine pales in comparrison..
I can realy connect with this too..
| maximusrexmundi 4/2/08 . chapter 1
heh like the crash bit, very well done. Quite a bit of drama too ;)