Wow pretty much covers what I want to say. That's a lot of emotion in a very small space!

I like it its really true. short and to the point. keep it up

I like this... it's really true and well done. I love hte part about the ribcage it was an awesome image, though the grammar of that sentence just seemed a bit odd. Other than that relaly beautiful job.

hmm I agree. lol doesnt stop me from helping anyone who strikes me as needy (prolly cuz I bury my own issues with other peoples... or so jen tells me...) lol anyway good poem :)

I totally agree. Though I hope you're referring to someone else, because I really don't see you as needy.

sweets

That was such a great poem. I love when authors have the ability to communicate deep feeling in short poems. Nice one.