By the 12 this is hillarious. why did you stop?

Oh gosh, I totally recognised Soul from the moment Hell said "FIRE!" That's brilliant! And you seem to enjoy writing about undead, don't you?

Great dialogue. I liked the bit that went “No, who. Hell is a who".

Can't wait for more. Hurry and update!

I don't know if I should be worried or not that I find a story about impending doom amusing...^^
Good job! I await the next chapter.
~*WynnFire*~

Nice first chapter. The description of Pestilence made me smile. You've got a knack for creating very unorthodox but appealing main characters, and your obsession with mythology certainly shows through! Keep it up!

Intriguing story so far. I presume the sick guy is Pestilence and the large guy is famine. It will be interesting to see where this story goes.

Wow! This looks like an interesting beginning. I hope to read more soon! ^_^

Abbot and Costello...are those nicknames or the actual names?
Interesting stuff... Write more! =)

Wow, this is kinda wierd. I'm writing a story with the four horsmen too. Anyway interresting start, though I'm not really all that partial to the first person thing.

On a side note I'm also reworking Tsunami so it will be better, but I can't decide whether to take the original down and repost it, or just post it as a seperate story. What do you think.