I like this... it's and interesting description... though the repetition was a bit much in parts.

that was cute in a way.
yay!
good job, senora.
=]

I liked the repition. For some reason ( =] ), you sound cynical and a little pissed off.

Hope things get better. If you need me to I can beat the shit out of someone. (Casi says she tells people if they're not nice she'll make me get 'em ... and that actually scares them ...)

-stix-

I can understand, actually. If you'd like to talk about it, just send me a mail.
I liked your repetitions, and how you'd simply let the words flow, just written it all down.
I liked how you expressed your emotions and the picture you drew.
Keep at it!
The Reverse Edge Blade

:) reviewing. So he broke up w/ his girlfriend (who you always hated) then asked you to try and make her feel better?! Wow he MUST be your brother, since brothers tend to not know ANYTHING... How could he get mad at you for not liking her? AGAIN?! wow. heh well good poem as always (liked the repetition)