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| Nemonus 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting. The cougar and the thunder evoke a sort of rumbling waiting. Nonsensical on the surface, but open to interpretation. "empty steel barstool" manages to give me the image of an entire dingy bar. |
| Faithless Juliet 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI really like this; it makes me think of colors for some reason - the pink of the first verse, and then when you mention steel I think of silver, and with Thunder I think of blue. All powerful visreal colors. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |