Reviews for like if i asked, i would ruin the magic

fatbird33 2008-05-11 ch 1,	abusesuper awesome.because this is so true. applause
painted.music 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abusekonban wa Right, so normally I would write a favorite line of sorts, but since they were all my favorite lines the best I can do is add this to my favorites list. Seems fair, don't you agree? Anyway, lovely. I have no words to express how beautifulbeautifulbeautiful I think this is. Ha det -Shan-
D351 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abuseThat is beautiful. I hope the formatting isn't an error because of the way fictionpress interprets files, because the psuedo-paragraphs with no caps thing works brilliantly for this piece. I wouldn't change a single character... unless there was a spelling error I missed.