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fatbird33
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abusesuper awesome.because this is so true. *applause*
painted.music
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abusekonban wa

Right, so normally I would write a favorite line of sorts, but since they were all my favorite lines the best I can do is add this to my favorites list. Seems fair, don't you agree? Anyway, lovely. I have no words to express how beautifulbeautifulbeautiful I think this is.

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D351
2008-04-03
ch 1,
abuseThat is beautiful. I hope the formatting isn't an error because of the way fictionpress interprets files, because the psuedo-paragraphs with no caps thing works brilliantly for this piece. I wouldn't change a single character... unless there was a spelling error I missed.
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