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| xLittleBlackConverse. 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abusehahaha really funny oneshot! defenitely original..and funny! Oh and the summary was hilarious!! lmao..haha cheers! |
| RoseLife 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseHAHA first of all SUCH A AWESOME STORY and second woo! xoxluurve des rule doesnt she? lol! but i seriously laughed so hard at the cutting the hair bit! well done! |
| fairEtales 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseomg. this is so cute. loved it. |
| Midnight Heaven 2008-04-05 ch 1, | abuseWoot! Good story with great humor, I couldn't stop laughing at some bits! Keep up the good work! =D =) |
| XOXLUURVE 2008-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuse=O 8) Alright, wow. I don't know where to start. First of all, WOW. When I got a PM telling me that someone has a similar pen name as me, I was like, wha? So I decided to go and check it out and then I was just literally shocked. In a good way x) You made my day, seriously. Okay, okay, haha, before I ramble on and on about this, I read your one shot and I really like it. The protagonist is really strong. Her personality is refreshing from what you usually see in this website, and I love, love, love the fact that Alistair is hot but he isn't those confident, perfect guys. He's actually clumsy and it makes me want to reach into the screen and pinch his cheeks x) Dane's just a weirdo. And Mary Sue with her hair cutting bit was random, and she needs a good slap across the face for doing that, but alright. If anyone touches my hair, oou. Let's not getting into that. LOL , thanks for the dedication. >< Ahem, and yeah, I read all my reviews, I do (what [wannabe, haha] author doesn't?) but I tend to answer the readers' questions in the story (or I PM them if, youknow, they really need the answer...). But, I digress. Point: this was cute and I'm looking forward to see more of your work. x) Stay awesome , xoxluurve |
| Pop the Bubble 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseHAHA thats pretty awesome. I loved the hitting with the glitter pot! |
| Ally 2008-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseHah. Slighty twisted. But awesome. |
| . 2008-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww... nice :) |
| Pinkamoo 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseHey, cute story. I liked the finger tinkling :p Copycat of xoxluurve much with the name? Whatever floats your boat, later alligator! |
| Jevanminx 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAHAHAHA that was excellent. Such a strange yet brilliant plot line. I loved it. And quite well written too, well done. JM |
| Living Life Free 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was so funny. I like it very much. Great job. |
| centenarian 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseVery funny...Nice work. Keep it up. :) I see you're a fan of xoxluurve. I am too. She's great. :) |