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| blackbubbleblue 2008-08-28 ch 4,  | abuseUm what? That was funny but it made no sense. End what? Was that code for something? |
| K.M.Mackenzie 2008-08-27 ch 2, | abuseI'd like to take this moment to point out that if you rail against all of these things, i.e. do the exact opposite, you will still end up with a fantastic story. For example: party in the house is unnecessary, could go clubbing instead if you set it in America, wouldn't it be interesting if your drunk protagonist was being snuck into the house by The Boy and they actually DID meet the parent/s? The list goes on. My other point is that I swear you forgot to mention the one where it goes from unrequited from the protagonist to the guy to surprisingly requited. IMPORTANT, girl, do not over-look that one. I think I could go on but I haven't finished the points, I'm just past 30, so I'll talk to you about it on MSN. By the way, what is the difference between a semicolon and a comma? I always get confused. :P |
| shesabeautyx 2008-08-27 ch 1, | abuseOMG Internet Stalking is ILLEGAL? What am I gonna do with all my time now? Oh dear. I laughed out loud at number 11 cause that's so me. I don't think twice about buying a super cute expensive dress or purse but when the prices of like fast food or smoothies go up I'm forever complaining. This was genius, a great read... seriously. I'm off to go read the other 3 now. |
| Ravina 2008-08-27 ch 4, | abuseThis is the last one? (Read: WAH!) Anyhow...this one confused the heck out of me but, in the end, I liked it. (Sorry, I just had to try to be a smart-ass in the last sentence. :D) I loved the Michael Phelps (#46), the Superman cape (#45), and the cute boy (#27) referrals. But, for some reason, my favourite one is #22. (Not that that's possible.) I'll go away now before I begin a thesis essay on this. Wirte mroe lsits! ( |
| simplicity is complex 2008-08-27 ch 4, | abuseHAHAHAHA WHAT THE HECK?! THE END :D |
| righthere431 2008-08-17 ch 1, | abusecol, i love this chapter |
| ThirtyTwoDays 2008-07-20 ch 2, | abuseHaha I lovelovelovelovelove the way you write. #50 all time favorite. |
| .Undecided.And.Confused. 2008-07-17 ch 3, | abuseGod was here. |
| skydancersrule 2008-07-16 ch 3, | abuseThank you so much for this. So, so much. |
| J.C. Lyn 2008-07-11 ch 3, | abuseLawl. Awesome. |
| Apple Cherry Muffins 2008-07-09 ch 2, | abuseNice. |
| LovelyxXxDreams 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abuseI swear i've done at least 10 of the things on the list! and now i plan on doing the scavenger hunt. Thank You! |
| Deppfan31 2008-07-06 ch 3, | abuseI didn't realize this was an ongoing process. I liked the last list, and I'm sad to say I've done a bunch of these things. Quite sad. And the fictionpress romance - it's so true. There's only so much you can do... there's only so many ways you can fall in love! Lol. My favorite point is 49 on the "Uselessly Spend Your Free Time" list - the that's-so-obvious-it's-so-out-there Post-Its. Hilarious! Lol. |
| sleepiedreamer 2008-07-06 ch 3, | abuselols how on earth did you come up with all this? hahas that was sure amusing to read. i was completely bored out of my mind and came across to this hehes! |
| sleepiedreamer 2008-07-06 ch 2, | abuselols nice... even with all this i can't be creative enough to think of a plot to write so. i'll stick with reading hahas! |