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XxBloodyxDeathxKittenxX 2008-05-14 ch 7,	abusewop go goddaughter it was awesome c us 2moz bye godmama
Psycho Shocker 2008-05-13 ch 7,	abuseOh, smack! I want to do this story so bad! I'm thinking of a huge plot twist that'll knock even the most seasoned fictionist off their feet! 5/5! RRDT!~
XxBloodyxDeathxKittenxX 2008-05-08 ch 6,	abuseTSUKI-CHAN!that was cool:)about time he found out about roto! haha youll have to tell me next week what will happen...OR ELSE!BWAHAHAHA!1ahem luv Koneko-sama
Psycho Shocker 2008-05-08 ch 6,	abuseLa merde! Améliorez alors le meilleur! Translation: The **! Better then the best! Beau!
Psycho Shocker 2008-05-06 ch 5,	abuseHm… I think that the fight for Roto's freedom of a rumor is not totally a believable fight. But, when you're in love, you do crazy things! XP I see a cameo by the author of a yaoi story, Puppy Love, Aki. And it just so happens that the main character in his story is called Sora. Found you out! XD RRDT!~
Sadistic Miss 2008-05-01 ch 1,	abuseI like this. Honestly, it looks a lot like loveless, but I wont point fingers and its not a serious writing thingy anyways. so I love it and I'll be checking for updates! nice writing!
XxBloodyxDeathxKittenxX 2008-05-01 ch 5,	abusetsuki-chan!that was good:):):) aw but so sad:(MAKE IT BETTER then we can go play on the railway tracks:) forever always godmother
XxBloodyxDeathxKittenxX 2008-04-24 ch 4,	abuseYEAH IT WAS DEDICATED 2 ME! tsuki has got lots of twists but shes waiting 2 pit them in:) i thought he was going 2 kill himself!? anyway luv u 2 god daughter xkoneko-chanx
Psycho Shocker 2008-04-24 ch 4,	abuseO.M.G. You broke the pattern! Yayness! And Roto is not so useless! Double Yayness! Until Next time… RRDT!~
Psycho Shocker 2008-04-18 ch 3,	abuseHm… The fact of the matter is, it's a very unbelievable relationship between Roto and Takahiro. If I were Roto, I would want to know everything. And I wouldn't want to be so useless. You should also try to differentiate your move names. They seem very… predictable. And the plot line is very predictable. Roto goes to school. Roto talks to girl. Roto gets somewhere out of school. Roto goes with Takahiro. Roto fights with Takahiro. Roto goes to sleep. How bout this? Roto goes to Jerusalem, through time warp, meets Jesus, gets baptized with Jesus, becomes a slave of God, and THEN goes to sleep. That is what I like in a story. But otherwise, good. I'm keeping an eye on it.
XxBloodyxDeathxKittenxX 2008-04-17 ch 3,	abuseGO TSUKI!ok i wont do it ...well 4 awhile you were cleverly typing away so i couldnt find any:( GET LOST NUTRITIONAL!tsukis story is her own and authors read books on a specific themes first then they write a story most have parts based on other stories!and she worked very ** this! YOU NUTRITIONAL KNOCKOFF HAHAHA !(proberly a couch potato so your not very nutritional!) go tsuki!you rule!
Melissa Norvell 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseIgnore Nutritional. They never have anything to say that's kind about anyone's works here. They just want to get you down and offer no critisism for anyone here from what I've read in reviews. So what if it sounds like Loveles? People have inspirations, you know. It's not like we're doing it as a profession it's just having fun and if you don't like it, don't even leave a review. This story isn't bad just because it has elements from an anime. Some of the most famous manga and anime have ideas that have been in other anime and manga. If you read a manga-ka's bio they tell you some of their inspirations and you can see it in their work. Like CLAMP are fans of Megumi Tachikawa (especially her Saint Tail series) and you can tell it in their art, which looks very similar to Megumi's. It's not a bad thing at all and don't let people get you down about it, Tsukimomo.
Nutritional 2008-04-11 ch 1,	abuseHello, Loveless knockoff.
XxBloodyxDeathxKittenxX 2008-04-10 ch 2,	abuseCaara screamed, pinning her son to the floor He though he saw something in his mother’s hand that he hoped would not be used on him. He saw that it was long... HAHA THAT WAS THE ROADSHOW THAT WE SAW WITH THAT CRAZY MAN AND THE BRatz doll
XxBloodyxDeathxKittenxX 2008-04-07 ch 1,	abuse“AH! Please! Stop it!” cried Roto as his mother... HI IVE MADE AN ACCOUNT ON HERE!NOW WELL B TOGETHER 4EVER..yuk:( i geuss you have figured out who it is cos im the one who kept picking on that extract...like the pervert i am...HAHAHA...ha? EGGNOG:)

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