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| misery sister 2008-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseIt's goo, but make sure to have punctuation checks every once in a while, and spelling too. |
| -RomanticallyCliched- 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusenice! shows how strong love can be. |
| d666lisa 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseGood oneshot :-) |
| Izzey 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusei liked it. are you going to write any more on it or is it just a one chapter thing? anywayz, it was good. |
| TCATH57 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseSweet story really entertaining I don't think you should add more even though you could if you want to. But to me it seems like a complete ending. Spelling and Grammer were pretty much perfect which always makes a story better to read. Keep writing more stories like this they're very enjoyable! |
| Jevanminx 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseIs that the end? Because I cant decide if I want more or not. It was brilliant as a one shot. But then I also wanna know more, and whether he goes through with everything and they actually go on that date. So cool though, a brilliant plot line. JM |