its awesum

I like this cute one-shot. It is nice to see how much a guy would sacrifice for a girl.

I pick up the photo and examine it. It's a picture of Tyler "working" at the animal shelter.

i don't know but i loved this line so much ! :P

and of course i loved the story too..much much more \(_)/

This was.. nice(:

I liked it ;)

She's so lucky someone that sweet, caring, thoughtful and just Tyler-like loves her... so jealous... hahaha

I didn't notice any lapses, but then again I'm not good at noticing those kind of things.

Good job.

Not really as good as your other ones, they had more detail and charater development, but it was still great.

hahaha very cute!

xx

Great one-shot!

Damn he must be in love with or something ;)

I'd never give up meat for a guy! _

This is awesome! :) best one i read today!

Cute

aaw T_T

you just made me lose hope on the male species. haha

jkjkjk (no offense to the male who read this :D)

i just wish a man would do those for me :

yeah right. lol

love love love it

Me likey!

Great oneshot! D

HC

xx

I think you did a good shop with the tense. I don't think I caught anything (and I can be pretty nitpicky about tense consistency). A little unbelievable and all, but very cute. I'm very glad the wicked monkey added this to our c2. (:

CUTE! :D *melting*

It's goo, but make sure to have punctuation checks every once in a while, and spelling too.