Interesting concept. I cant say I agree entirely, but the argument made is a good one. I like the imagery a lot. You really have a knack for physical description.

I'm impressed you packed this much thought into seven lines. I loved the theory/fact that you can never feel anything unless you've felt something to compare it to; seems pretty circle like to me. I'd love to know what your opinion on abortion actually is. As usaul, vocabularly was exellent, and very philisophical. Keep writing. :]

A lot was said in such a brief amount of words. Nicely done.