The first two lines I didn't really like at all... they sounded weird and I wasn't sure how they fit it, but I loved the whole knife thing.

the death won't knock on your door.. you don't need the the

maybe I love you more than I do... how can you love someone more than you love them? That confused me

The whole sofa/pillow thing was really great.

Nice piece... you had some really unique images in there... well done.

I love the last two lines.

I know exactly how that feels.

i thought it really portrayed how people long for each other. good job.