|Reviews for Not too bad|
| simpleplan13 4/4/08 . chapter 1
The first two lines I didn't really like at all... they sounded weird and I wasn't sure how they fit it, but I loved the whole knife thing.
the death won't knock on your door.. you don't need the the
maybe I love you more than I do... how can you love someone more than you love them? That confused me
The whole sofa/pillow thing was really great.
Nice piece... you had some really unique images in there... well done.
| Jae-Kyeong 4/4/08 . chapter 1
I love the last two lines.
I know exactly how that feels.
| East-0f-Eden 4/3/08 . chapter 1
i thought it really portrayed how people long for each other. good job.