Reviews for Paper Dolls, Glass toys

Andrea Lotte 2008-04-07 ch 1,	abuseI really like this, especially the bit with paper dolls and non-beating hearts...and the "playtime's disruption" bit too. Nice work!
Articous 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abuseThis was very well written. I liked it a lot & good luck in writing more.
Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abuseI like the rhyme scheme. You did an all around good job with that. I also like the twist at the end. All the pretty things you built up at the beginning, you destroyed at the end.
DyingLeo 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abuseThis piece was beautiful. Very intense.
hoperoma 2008-04-03 ch 1,	abuseThis was an excellent poem. I loved it and can tell there is a lot of meaning in it. I will definitely keep my eye out for more. Keep writing and good luck!