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Sugary Sweet and Sour
Rightest Rachel
2008-11-27 . chapter 2
The government system reminds me of soviet Russia’s system.
M.R.Sanner
2008-04-04 . chapter 1
Oh interesting ! So it's sort of like Candy land , very cool .This was well written , and had a good selection of vocabulary and over all a really nice flow to the prologue . I am anticipating the next chapter !
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