Reviews for Forbidden Blood - FictionPress.com

Reviews For: Forbidden Blood - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

Masquerade hide your face 2008-07-17 ch 2,	abusewow this is so good. I can't wait till the next chapter update soon!
ISleep 2008-07-01 ch 2,	abuseI would have been like, "Hey whoa Mister Vampire. You need to back off!" But I wasn't there so I couldn't. Nice times. Love it though.
Birds and Boats 2008-06-26 ch 2,	abusei like it, although it rings a bit close to twilight, but i often jump to conclusions like that so pay no mind, its me not you ;)
dreambrother63 2008-05-23 ch 2,	abusei LOVE this series you're doing but please please please review?!
N.M.E 2008-05-22 ch 2,	abuseThe rewrite is great! The chapter is longer with a lot more detail. But, I really didn't like the part where his whole family comes to Lady Jane's Diner. It seemed a bit odd. Other than that it's great! Update soon!
Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-17 ch 2,	abuseI'm just getting into the story! Can u update soon?! Im guessing they are vampires? and the womans hair is red because its soaked with blood?? :D true, blood doesnt run upwards, so...Please update soon!
naokoangel01 2008-05-13 ch 1,	abuseThis one is really good :) Keep it up
FarFromGrace 2008-05-11 ch 2, anon.	abuseOh wow. I loved the original one, but this one for sure is already proving to be so much more spectacular! I loved how you added that little confrontation in the beginning at the diner, as well as describing here and there clothing in the beginning such as the mother's red dress and so on, although its not that important it provides a better mental picture. The whole birth control with the phone numbers was hilarious aswell! I also like how Green eyed boy is portrayed as way more badass. Sexy much? haha till next chapter! x
.FRANCi. 2008-05-10 ch 1,	abuseHmm. Well, I'll give you something. You certainly have a way of bringing people to read your stories, because they are amazing, missy. The plot alone had me hooked, and I wanted to read this story immediately. I've only read the prologue, but, that's all I need to know, to inform me that the rest of this story (Sorry. Novel! And yes, there is a difference between a novel and story. Well, I guess that's obvious. Lemme shut up) will be amazing! So, kudos to another job well done, even though it's not finished yet. Cannot wait!
Mileana 2008-05-10 ch 2,	abuseA mention of Gillan! cheers I think he really needs a fan. I like the new introduction to Kane, loved actually. I like when he's moody. But yes, I prefer it to the old one. Fiona's reaction to him as well was good. (If I say so myself) Fiona smokes? Did she smoke in the last version? Nice ending to the first chapter, very suspensful. I did recognise dialogue which I was very proud of myself for. You? Typo? Really? My usual fangirl prasises to you. Wonderful writing as always. Looking forward to the rest of the rewrite.
Obsessive Pyromaniac 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseThat's freaky. But good. But freaky. Gosh. Suspense. Update soon!
naokoangel01 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abusePlease continue in writing the story :)
Lyra Waterflame 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseInteresting fic... please write more soon?
rachely 2008-05-08 ch 2,	abuseEver since I read the Twilight Series by Stephanie Meyer I've loved these kind of stories. Seems like it'll be good. :)
vtcullen 2008-05-08 ch 2,	abuseI love the way Kane is presented. In fact, I love the new chapter. I just have one issue...Fiona smokes? What? She didn't somke in the original, did she? I don't really see her as a smoker. Hmm. Oh well, she's your character. Update ASAP!

Return to Top