Masterfully written, a true pleasure to read;

*“They mistake coldness for silence. They expect me to be ignorant and childish. I do not adhere to anyone’s perceptions.”* Her perfect defining line.

*Taking both of my hands into his he said, “I knew I would like you.” I gave a small smile at that. It was nice to be flattered for me, rather than my wealth.* charming breathy undeniable chemistry, interweaved with danger.

*Somehow we managed to make everything a game. There was never a clear winner though.* their relationship with a fine comb.

The ending was sweet and fun, full of promise of a future and adventure and problems but challenges well-faced.

I loved this, very well written. I really enjoyed the dialogue and they have great chemistry. I would love to read more about them.

I like your story alot it should be intresting to see if there relationship will withstand all of the obsticals that are shure to be thrown at them...sorry for spelling but I really like your story alot!

I liked this and definitely would like to see a sequel! Very well written.