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| Reviews for once upon a time |
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   RockerDutchess 4/10/08 . chapter 1this one i know it isnt intended to be funny but i laughed a little and it kind of reminds me of my home one |
| Aryna Heart 4/8/08 . chapter 1 I like it! |
| Renee M. Thomas 4/3/08 . chapter 1 This is really good! Nice flow, and I like the "once upon a.." effect, as it makes it more real and lifelike. Just watch your grammar and spelling a bit. Otherwise, great! |
