I think this was really sweet! The girl at the end was the girl who met him, right? Like there's just one? Oh well, either way-- very sweet.

This is a really wonderful story! Very cute and relatable. ^_^

Some of the other reviews mentioned that there were two girls? When I read it, I understood it to be just one. The end is a flashback to when they first met, right? The fact that the song was playing in the background then is why it became so important to him?

Well, I thought it was very well written! Just wanted to clarify...

Haha I like it! I actually thought he'd like end up with the first girl.. so when the second appeared it was a nice twist. (:

Very well written. This story is just one of those stories I thought I was going to stop reading at the third sentence, but surprisingly I read the whole thing (I get bored quickly) I like it and I'm disapointed there isn't more! AW! lol It's written very well and I like your choice of words to describe what the characters are doing and what they are feeling. The descriptive scenes make me visualize them in my head. ^^

I'm sorry i love the story but HUH?!
I'm confused
What does the second girl have 2 do with anything?

Well I DEFINITELY liked it, my only problem was how quickly he got over the first girl.. haha
Good job :)