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| Kiwi-kiwi6 2008-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseMy dad says 'No comments from the peanut gallery' all the time! I love the last line of this. I love the feeling of fear you feel. It's amazing. |
| Lurid Black 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseHaha, to balance out dusk the previous poem you wrote this amazing piece, yet again, I see you can turn topics like that into greatness, well done =] |
| Laurena 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseit was amazing...except for the last line, it was forced. redo it. rename this something else, but i like how its not depressing, it amazing, its one of the best flowing poems u've written (: but u need to change the last line and rename this this, sry. redo (: |