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| Lurid Black 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome! But I liked the use of depictions in the others more-so, however beside that said I think it was still, very unique, and I loved it. |
| Black Kettle Tea 2008-04-13 ch 1,  | abuseI loved the repitition in this! Great job, as always. Love and Hearts and Unicorns and Whatnot, ~Ani P.S. your reviews make me blush xD. you actually influenced me to write poetry. i was like, I CAN DO IT. and i spent lotsa time on them ^^ im glad u likey like. |
| shutitoff 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. A bit hyphen-happy aren't you? I liked the repetition, the imagery was lovely too. |
| OurDayArising 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love this. You're an amazing poet. Lord... I'm just speechless, again! |
| Shasta Valentine 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abusei really like the line, " with cancerous touches" keep writing because i know ill keep reading! -sv |