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painted eyes 2009-02-01 . chapter 1
I've just read a couple of your poems and you have a really interesting and unique way of writing.

I like the last line of this poem.

~painted
Hidden Sword of Truth 2008-09-15 . chapter 1
The way you write is intresting.

*Tiffy
Tranquil Thorns 2008-04-04 . chapter 1
Interesting little poem.
The first line especially stuck out at me. The use of 'accedes' and 'access' together just works in a certain way that's almost fun to pronounce. =P

I like how you used French, too, though I can't say I understood it all. I'm sorry if it's a phrase I should know or be able to figure out. I speak Russian and know a morsel of Spanish, but no French. =/
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